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ajjones2
11-18-2003, 7:27 AM
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btlimited
11-18-2003, 8:54 AM
that was amazing!
toejam
11-18-2003, 11:34 AM
Bravo A well writen chapter as allways.
pepe3z
11-18-2003, 11:48 AM
Man, this is the best story I´ve read in my whole life... please, please, please go on with it.
Ste Letto
11-19-2003, 5:08 AM
You know, and I hope you take this as the compliment it most definitely is, if I didn't know better, I'd swear I'd written this.

You fantasise to extremity the way my mind fantasises to extremity.

I love this.

The absolute, heartless, merciless destruction of men at the feet of incredible, beautiful, powerful women is amazing.

(The chair and drillbits idea was a very nice touch!!!!!!!)

I doff my cap to you sir.:D
stableboy
11-20-2003, 4:18 AM
Great chapter (as usual)!! I'd like to read more about Carolyn's parties! :cool:
somfhboy57
11-20-2003, 9:29 AM
great imagination, this story, coupled with illustrations would fetch some cash...
MrRugman
11-20-2003, 10:50 AM
No, make it a Video!!!!!!!!
Heckron
11-21-2003, 2:30 PM
NO, A VIDEOGAME!!!

*slaps self* Hold on there Heckron...getting ahead of yourself!

I think i'll just settle with...an interactive virtual reality experience!!!

:eek: :D :D :eek: