Traffic Stop -- Part 70 --

[ajjones3]

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[ajjones3]

Paula hesitated. This was the moment. “Amanda.” Paula replied. “She’s perhaps the only woman in the world who hasn’t had the Treatment.” She paused. “Her DNA is clean.”

“What do you mean?” Kelly asked.

“Don’t you understand?!” Paula’s voice was strained. “Amanda’s DNA is the key to reversing whatever in the Treatment gives us the biological need to hurt the men! To not feel empathy for them! Kelly! Amanda’s DNA is our trail of breadcrumbs back to the way it used to be!”

[Heckron]

Oh no! It's gonna go back to the way it used to be?! I don't want it to!

Fantastic story again Aj!
I love it as usual!

[manager]

:2guns: Great chapter as usual! Is balance about to be restored?
do I smell civil war? hmmmmm

[chicagofeet]

This IS such an amazing great story. What a film it will make! Better than the backstory of Terminator. 12 Monkeys, Land Before Time. So many plot lines come to mind.

[hhhmmm]

Ya know? I don't know what direction I want to see this story go. Working it's way back to the way it was the way before, or let the last woman on Earth as it is now, get the "treatment".

Since I'm not really into the giantess stuff, guess that I would like to see some sort of life line for getting back to normal. But ua know, it's your story.

Thanks for all of the hard work. I just wish that I had the imagination to write stories. If I did, then I would write my own, and not rely on the story board.

Once again, thanks for the hard work. I'm sure that it takes time to think of story lines, and time to write them out.

hhhmmm

[TF0]

I like the idea that Paula and Kelly shuold be able to realize and overcome the treatment brainwashing...that shows they really do have power.

Cause I don't like it that the women in this story don't even realize what has happened to them, That leaves them in a state more enslaved then the men...know what I mean.

To have false memory implemented unknowingly seems like a worse violation then lets say "rape".

So I like this development of the story though I don't know if two women can do anything about it other then effect themselves.

[floorofspikehh]

let me guess the direction.
world changes back,size back and gene back.but both men and women get used to the life style in treatment,and those who are alike paula kelly and amanda realize where the right place men should be is on the ground at women's feet.femdom becomes the main culture of the whole world.women becomes more cruel than in treatment world because the whole world find femdom is nature of human being

[mashedup]

I don't really care which way the story goes. I have enjoyed reading each and every single episode from the very beginning. I only wish something like this could be made into a movie. That would be awesome.

[Escargot211]

Ajjones, please, don't let this wonderful story end so soon!
I'm always in hope that some day Kelly and Paula will make love on lucky Paul, this time with the boots on. :)

[Syphonboy]

Yea I look forward to a happy ending with a few more blood and grime along the way

[ajjones3]

Thank you, everyone for the comments! It's really a compliment that you all are still interested after all this time!

Sorry I don't get a chance to reply more. It's not that I'm antisocial or dont' read everything, it's just that I'm overwhelmed with other stuff!

I hope Traffic Stop hasn't been too predictable; and, if you'll agree it hasn't, then you won't worry too much about it becoming predictable NOW! :-)

It can't go on forever, or I'll eventually lose your interest or start repeating things, which would be a disservice to the tale!

It will take a while to develop the conclusion, though, and I hope you'll stay with it...I think you'll all like the ending, no matter what you're hoping for or expect.

Again, thanks for keeping the faith!

AJ

[SoleMann]

An ending??? Say it isn't so :(
I look forward to a new chapter of your story every week even more than any weekly hit show on TV.