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ajjones3
08-12-2005, 4:09 PM
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pervy2
08-13-2005, 12:00 AM
Superb! Oh the suspense is killing me, I love this series.
I am sure you write for a living, must find out more about you. A loyal fan, p2.

doormat2002
08-13-2005, 5:33 PM
AJ, your series is absolutely awesome! I guess people have gotten used to reading it regularly, and don't stop to say thank you every time, but I'm sure everyone here appreciates your contributions. I for one am a big fan, and on one hand I'd like to see the final vision you have for the new world after the Treatment, but on the other I don't want the series to ever end:) Anyway, a big thank you from me, and congrats on your writing skills, which make the reading a great experience.
Looking forward to the next chapter,
Doru

manager
08-14-2005, 5:21 PM
:2guns: Excellent as usual.Honestly this is one of the best stories I've ever read, the whole series. Thank you for sharing your talent with the board. oh and lets revisit the carnage of the concert(those poor bastards under the net) and the marathon thats awsome:2guns:

Escargot211
08-14-2005, 5:39 PM
Yes! Let's find the limits... and push them! ;)

Added:
I see a possible development, here: Amanda gets used to abuse men and she wants the Treatment as soon as possible, but Kelly and Paula try to delay it until they have enough DNA samples.
Gus helps Amanda have the Treatment for the love of her, and Kelly and Paula get mad at him and decide to stomp him for good with spike heeled boots. :)

stomp on me
08-19-2005, 6:20 AM
oh man!!!i cant wait for the next part...thank you for the continuing with this.....