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Escargot211
08-30-2005, 9:12 AM
Preface:
I wrote this story in the Italian Section some time ago. Some have liked it, so now I try to translate it in English the best I can.

Background (useful for not-Italian people).
In Italy there is a satyrical tv-show where sometimes appear two beautiful girls who dance a little on the stage.
These girl were called "veline" and the show director changes them once every year or two.
In the year 2002 the two current veline Elisabetta Canalis and Maddalena Corvaglia (see picture below), became so popular that almost every girl wanted to be a "velina" herself. So the contest for choosing the next veline became a show of its own.
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This is the fictional story (in 3 parts) of one episode of that show.
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"Good evening, people of Venice! And welcome to tonight's show!". Two beautiful women, one blonde and the other dark haired, walked onstage and waved to the audience who crowded in the square to see the show.
Both women were wearing a brown leather skirt, a pale brown shirt, and brown leather knee high boots.
Like every night from a month ago they were about to introduce the girls for the contest of the new "veline".
They themselves have been veline in the last year and now were hosting the tv-program that would have crowned the new ones.
"Let's waste no time: here we have the girls for tonight!", said the blonde woman. And 6 girls jumped on stage and danced to the music, while reaching for their seats onstage. A camera made a close up of their faces, then their feet: they all wore sandals, shoes or boots, but always with stiletto heels.
"As you can see, this is the blonde girls' day", said the brunette, "so, Maddalena, I leave the girls in your hands, while I take care of the carpets".
"Sure, Elisabetta!"
Elisabetta walked towards the front end of the stage, where 6 men were competing in a contest of their own: one of them will have to honor to be the living walkway for the new veline.
This was actually a surviving contest: the last of them to be alive at the end of the night will be the winner.
Fixed to the stage, there were two parallel steel bars, with a distance of 9 feet between them.
Six men waited layng face up between the two bars: they were hanging with their wirst chained to one bar and ankles to the other bar. They wore nothing but a slip and between them and the ground below them, there were 5 feet of air.
Elisabetta was now on the edge. She paused her stride and talked to the audience.
"While the girls are blonde, the boys are skinny, tonight."
The show directors divided the contenders in two categories, and each night only one of them was onstage. The women were sorted in blondes and brunettes; the men in fat and skinny. That was meant to show men's ugliness.
Elisabetta stepped ahead and put her left foot on the groin of the first man. She slowly shifted all her weight on that foot, savouring the moment, and then put also the right foot next to the left, on his stomach, balancing her weight on both feet.
She noticed that the his body didn't bend downwards under her: production's assistants have tied him very well, removing that awful hammock effect.
Of course, being hanged so tight was very painful for them men, but they had time enought to scream in the afternoon, before the show.
Elisabetta turned rightwise on her heel, facing the head of the man. She saw the pain in his eyes and his tiny, already tortured body.
She was clearly heavier and taller (even without her 5 inches heels) than him, and he was suffering like hell, under her. She loved that thought.
She looked down at her feet and saw her boots' heels on his stomach and her soles on his chest.
Those boots were very quality ones. The show was an hit, so they can afford the best appareal for the two hosts.
The heel was high and very thin and the toe was thin, too. Those boots were the perfect torturing device for the men who happened to be beneath them: a kick with her toe would knock everyone out cold. A twist with her heel would throw him in an abyss of pain.
The beautiful woman wanted to test this theory and slowly shifted a little more of her weight on the heels. That was enought to make him grind his teeth and wince in pain.
"That's true!", she mumbled at herself, smiling, "The best results with a little effort."
But there was no time to waste, so she proceeded with her job.
"First contender is 72 years old, 5'8'' tall and just weights 11 pounds."
She kneeled on him: her left foot and right knee on his chest and her right boot's toe resting on his groin.
"Hi! Tell us something about you! Were do you come from and why you are here tonight?" and put her mic close to his mouth.
"I've been all my life a footstool for horsewomen: I get on four and they stepped on my back to mount their ride, but that day a woman wanted to ride me instead of her horse... She kicked and whipped and dug her spurs on me, commanding to run... She rode me all day long!"
"That's very interesting, but why did you came here?" She asked while twisting her left heel on his chest, meaning that he'd better make a brief summary.
"After that experience my back hurted bad. I was no more of use as a footstool, so my mistress sold me to the show productors and here I am."
"Well! Let's see the second contender!"
Elisabetta rised on her feet and stepped on the next man.
"He is 20 years old and is 5'9'' tall and weights 11 pounds. Were are you from?"
"I don't know! I have an hole in my memory. They have found me in a rubbish dump. Show directors have allowed me to heal because I was in a very bad shape."
"I see it." Said the woman, seeing the remaing scars and bruises still covering is body.
"Well, mistery man... whatever you have been through, it can't be worse of what will happen to you tonight."
A thunderous laugh arised from the audience. She rised on her feet and smiled down at him. Her right boot grazed his face before stepping on the next man and pushing all her weight on him.

Majordome66
08-30-2005, 10:56 AM
Hi Escargo,
the first episode is very appealing specialy when you have the photos of the "Veline" printed ! Wait for the others.

Thanks for the translation.

reflux
08-30-2005, 11:47 AM
thnx, great story. Wait for the others. :D

iwantkylietowalkonme
08-30-2005, 12:18 PM
Great start looking forward to the rest...

....it's cool to because of the clips you used to have of elizabeth on your old site and the fact that we have seen her at least in a victory pose in those...
.....also helps that she is gorgeous.:D

Donkey
08-30-2005, 3:46 PM
Escargot211 great story. I love the concept of cruel dominant women rule!


iwantkylietowalkonme ...that is the greatest name I've ever seen on this site!

;)

hhhmmm
08-30-2005, 9:30 PM
Escargot211:

There was another version of something like this posted on the net before. But with the boots, this is a beautiful story!! Can't wate to read the rest of it!!

hhhmmm:)

floorofspikehh
08-31-2005, 1:49 AM
WOW,more please.
i wish i could read 100 chapters of this story.

kiko
08-31-2005, 2:11 AM
Hey - THATS a great beginning ! :eek: I like the Idea of a TV-Show and especially the cruel way of the women....torturing the men under thei spiked heels until the very END :D

Cheers, KIKO

Escargot211
08-31-2005, 7:50 AM
Originally posted by iwantkylietowalkonme
....it's cool to because of the clips you used to have of elizabeth on your old site and the fact that we have seen her at least in a victory pose in those...
.....also helps that she is gorgeous.:D

Yes, very beautiful pose, and very gorgeous woman. :)


Originally posted by hhhmmm

There was another version of something like this posted on the net before. But with the boots, this is a beautiful story!!


I remember that: "Trample Jeopardy". A great classic.

Originally posted by floorofspikehh

WOW,more please.
i wish i could read 100 chapters of this story.


Sorry, there are only three of them, and not that long. :(
At a certain point, I lost my inspiration.

However, here we go:
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"The third contendent is 27 years old, is 5'8'' tall and 100 pounds. Hi! what do you want to say?"
"I was not meant to be here! I had my job in a night club, serving as a carpet to female workers there. It was a good job... a bit rough, sometimes, but granted my place in society. One night, while going home, the production's huntress caught me and... now I'm here."
"Don't be sad! If you will survive tonight you'll be famous! Every night you will be trampled by the next veline and seen by the tv audience. Probably you will not last all the episodes, but you will surely have your 15 minutes of fame."
She got up on her feet and turned towards the next man, then suddenly had a second thought and looked again down at him.
"Well, of course I didn't mean that the girls will kill you only in 15 minutes, but... who tells!"
She smiled cruelly at him and stepped off him and on the next man.
This one has been nervous from the beginning of the show, but when Elisabetta stepped on him with all her weight, he started screaming and squirming like he had suddenly gone mad.
Of course, being tied so tightly, he couldn't effectively move: all he could do was just tremble a little, no way he could knock the woman off of him. She, instead, found so amusing having a man squirming so much under her feet.
"Maddalena, come here! This is the funniest thing that has ever been under my feet!"
Maddalena didn't waste time and quickly reached the edge of the stage, then walked carelessly on the men on the way (who cried a little under the boots of the blonde woman) and quickly reached the "rebel carpet", standing on his stomach, while Elisabetta stood on his chest, enjoyng man's little moves.
He can do nothing but to endure the weight of these two beautiful women on his chest, suffer the pain those four heels were inflicting him and scream at the sky with all the little air he was able to inhale.
But soon he seemed to lose all his strenght: stopped screaming and squirming and remained still under the two.
Elisabetta kneeled on him and asked: "So, who are you and where do you came from?"
Nobody knows where did he find enought air to scream back at her:
"STEP OFF AND LOOSE MY WRISTS! HOW DO YOU DARE TO TRAMPLE ME! MY MISTRESS WILL KICK YOUR ASSES FOR GOOD FOR WHAT YOU ARE DOING ME!"
"This is starting to be boring!" Elisabetta mumbled to herself.
She get on her feet, hands on her hips and looked coldly at him. Then she kicked him in the jaws with those deadly boots.
She stepped with both feet on his face, soles resting on his forehead and heels digging in his cheeks and started marching in place, each step leaving heel marks on his face. She hoped those marks will remain for all his miserable life.
"Is that all you have to say?" she hasked, while turning on his head and putting her left foot on his lips and her right one on his forehead. "Come on, be a rebel some more! Make us enjoy your useless rage!"
Maddalena, who was still on his stomach, added "Yes, squirm some more, or I swear I'll hurt you for good!" and stepped backwards, digging her right boot's heel on his scrotum, shifting all her weight on that heel.
He suddenly started squirming again, trying to escape, to knock them out, to make them cease this torture, but his vain efforts' only achievement was to make the two woman laught at him.
When he lost his energy again and remained still, Maddalena went back to the stage, thus trampling again all the men who were in her way. Elisabetta, instead, wiped her boots twice on the already bruised and punctured face of the man underfoot, with much satisfaction for her and much pain for him. Then she stepped from his face to his chest and then on the chest of the next man.

Escargot211
09-03-2005, 3:10 AM
Third part:
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"Oh my! Who we have here!" Said Elisabetta after stepping on the next man. "You have to know that I already know of this boy down here" and she tapped the toe of her boot on the chest of the 20-something man, who was looking up at her with feverish passion.
"This morning, he sneaked into our hotel's room. We thought he was a thief, so me and Maddalena attacked him at once, throw him on the floor, and pinned him down under our feet, while calling the security. After some time, we discovered that he was only a fan and wanted to ask our authograph. However, we thought of keep him for tonight's show."
Then, turning on her heels towards his face, asked: "Tell me, are you still in love with me?"
He, with wide opened eyes, nodded his head.
"Even with all I did you this morning?"
He nodded again.
"How nice from you! I let you kiss my foot." and posed the sole of her right boot on the boy's lips for him to kiss, while her left foot was still crushing his chest. He kissed passionately her boot.
"I really hope you'll survive, tonight. But, if that's not the case, I want for you to go to the afterworld with something that will make you remember of me: the autograph I didn't give you this morning."
She pressed her right heel in the middle of his chest and pushed on it with all her weight, even bouncing a little. Then she twisted it, for good measure and then removed the heel to see her footwork.
There was an hole so deep that, even if the girls would go wild on him, it would remain alway the deepest one. If he had died tonight, the stop of blood flow would keep that mark on his body forever, as if it was on tarmac.
He was suffering as never before, but was also happy as never before, because her beloved goddess was standing glorious on him and he was more than happy to be her pedestal; so while she was torturing him, he didn't make a noise, lost in that beauty from below.
He wanted to give a last kiss to that foot that nearly killed him, but she had already stepped off him and on the next contendent, so his last wish was not going to became reality.
The sixth and last contender was a 33 years man and was very short, less then 4 feet; actually, he was a midget.
Elisabetta stepped squarely on him, but her feet were longer the what his body was large and it was difficult for her to keep balance. Se she turned her feet to face him.
Even so, that man was just a little footstool for her: her heels digged in his groin, while her boot's toes touched his chin. With both her feet together on him, she covered his whole body, from side to side.
She once again wondered on how human body was resilient: she expeted that his little and frahile body would crush and rip off under her weight, but it seemed that it was able to hold her, even if all his bones were loudly crunching.
"Better this way." She mumbled to herself. "I don't like to fall 5 feet down."
She asked herself how did he feel to have a women so heavier than him stand on his body, suspended in the air just by his wrist and ankles. His contorted face was a well clear answer: pain, pain and pain.
There was not enought room for her to kneel on him, like she did with the others, so she sitted on her heels and approched the microphone to his head.
"Want you say something about you?"
He can't speak, but above all he can't breath, because her weight was equally parted between her heels on his groin and her soles on his chest. She noticed it and shifted her weight on her heels, to let him raise his chest a little and breath.
"I worked in a cleaning service. My shortness allowed me to reach places other people can't, so to brush them clean. One day I get stuck in a passage too short even for me. My boss take no responsability for me and let me there to die. I was finally take out of there from people of the production and they put me here. The hell with them! I would have preferred die there than suffering this way."
"So you're not used to be walked on by a woman, do you?"
He motioned a no with his head.
"I see it. And are you suffering too much now that you are under my feet?"
He nodded, while tears run from his eyes.
"But I'm not even one of the girls of tonight. Do you know what will happen when they will stomp you to win the contest?"
She didn't wait for an answer and stood high again on him, while the audience cheered at her.
It that poor man would be able to see the faces of the six girls, he would probably die for the fear.
They were looking at him with loads of lust and cruelty in their eyes. They were even too eager to trample for good that little defenseless man. And each of them was wispering at the near girls: "Don't you dare to kill him before it's my turn to have fun on him".
Luckly for him, he was not able to see that scene, because his restrain keep his face towards the sky.
"Come on, show all your strenght. Be a man!" said Elisabetta, and jumped three times on his body. They were not bounces but very high jumpes and the feet actually leaved his body and then landed heavly again on him.
Was she trying to squeeze the strenght out of him as it was toothpaste?
At avery jump he wished it was the one that killed me and ended this torture.
"Now that we have know the carpet, I leave it to you, Maddalena, to introduce the girls." And she stepped again on the six men to return on the stage.

THE END

floorofspikehh
09-03-2005, 6:56 AM
great!more more more more more

hhhmmm
09-03-2005, 12:48 PM
I agree!! You need to continue the story, and what a wonderful start!! Would love to see more chapters written.

Hope this gives you the encouragement to continue!

hhhmmm

reflux
09-03-2005, 3:10 PM
MMMMOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! GREAT STORY, keep going, more :D