There She Was

[gobblegobble]

There she was.

I had seen her here before, but there was an enchanting air about her tonight. You could feel the air lighten just as a loud chorus of laughter erupted from the back of the bar. The hearty bellows caught the attention of everyone in attendance . . . everyone except for me. As she quickly turned to survey the commotion, my cock-happy gaze was still fixated on that beautiful ass. Or maybe it was the hem of her skirt, or those pink stilettos, or the arch in her back. Maybe my mind simply overheated wondering how on earth a pony tail could be so sexy. I really can’t be sure. What I was sure of, immediately, was that I was busted!

This was no ordinary make eye contact - make your move moment; this was no ordinary love. Her eyes captured my soul, and I stood there naked before her. The world evaporated into all of its nothingness, and all that remained were two piercing blue eyes, a pair of priceless jewels beckoning ‘I know you want me.’ A pair of sleek but full lips slowly parted. ‘Kiss. My. Ass.’

Man! This girl was beyond hot! Her beauty was simply overwhelming. Her long chestnut hair sent the blood rushing through my veins. Her beautiful copper skin tone contrasted smartly with her carefree smile. And her figure, well, simply amazing! The lowcut pink blouse struggled to contain two perfect snowcaps yearning to feel the mountain breeze. Her skirt was flattering, but it was painfully obvious that no skirt could do justice to an ass like that. One look at her perfectly sculpted calves, accentuated by those pink heels, and my heart began to pound with the intensity of an all-night rave. I swear I felt a shot of cum shoot straight from my brain and into my balls.

But for all of the activity fluttering within me, I stood there completely frozen. The dumbfounded look on my face told her everything that she needed to know. Without missing a beat the sultry sexpot continued making her way towards me. Should I meet her half way? No, be cool. No, BE A MAN. Ahh, fuck it. And then there she was.

“Hi. I’m Kelly” she said as she shook my balls. Well, not so much shook, but more like weighed them with her nimble fingers. The sensation of her nails teasing my boys through cotton slacks was unbelievable! A lesser man would have shot his load on the spot. Those sparkling blue eyes told me that was the effect she was shooting for.

“Kelly. I’m Ronin” I countered, slowly shaking her sweet tit. It was obvious that she was impressed by my sudden recovery so I offered to buy her a drink. “A fuzzy navel” she softly giggled, as she guided my forgotten hand southbound towards her midsection.

[gobblegobble]

Thought I would take a stab at storytelling.

Any feedback, flames, or especially visual stimulation is always welcome.

To be continued (probably)...

graciass
gobble

[mulderboy]

the lowcut pink blouse struggled to contain two perfect snowcaps yearning to feel the mountain breeze. :confused:

Are you describing the Alps or beautiful breasts? :D

Great start for the story. Hope you will continue!

[chuck23]

Thanks for posting gobblegobble...I've said it before and I'll say it again, it is better to post and be subject to criticism or indifference then not to post at all...I've written an extneded two part story myself similar to your more in-depth approach regarding character development and heightened suspense...my only recommendations at this point are as good as you are with the details, adding simple height, weight and body type dimensions can be very effective when writing more developed stories...it just seems to make the whole thing more real I think...and as mentioned previously, giving the proper poetic justice to this Kelli certainly is warranted, but as far as the purposes of this forum (we're not really a publishing house) go, they're not always essential to the rhythm of your story...so yes those carefully chosen metaphors and similes are welcome but I've learned should not be overdone.. as far as things I say should be left alone and developed, I really appreciated beginning with our main character and his obsession with this painfully hot blonde (or off color blonde, whichever she is)...this naturally makes one wonder how this whole thing with this alluring and captivating Kelli will turn out...so by all means, you definitely have my support to continue....thanks again...

-chuck23

[gobblegobble]

Here she is, Kelly Fabiola Smith (OK, really just Fabiola). Hope this helps with some of the details. I'd say she is about 5'7", 110 lbs, 34-26-38. Oh yeah, and an ass so fat you can see it from the front (thanks mos def).

Somehow I knew she'd be waiting for me at maximonline.com.

[gobblegobble]

After a few more fuzzies, and a couple hours of painful restraint on my part, we decided to catch a cab back to my townhouse. The 10-minute ride was fairly uneventful; some small talk, some light petting, and the like. Kelly asked me to fix a cup of joe, as she found her way to the deck. It was a perfect evening outside. The river was alive and the moon was unmistakably full (to say nothing of my raging cock and balls). We sipped our coffee as she began to open up about her experiences at university.

“I was always drawn to the older guys in college. It just seems like they are so much more in tune with what a woman wants. They understand that a woman like me wants a man eager to please, but not a spineless jellyfish, ya know?” Uh-huh. “I could tell you some stories that would make your hair stand on end.”

“I’m sure that’s not all that would be standing at attention.”

“Oh really?” she responded snuggling closer to me on the two-seater, her hand lightly tracing the 8-inch outline on my trousers. Her head resting gently on my shoulder, she continued “Well, I’ve never been very good with math, and I was having an especially tough time with freshman calculus. So I set up an appointment with the professor in his office.” As Kelly continued to chat about the details, my hand found its way to her magnificent ass cheek. “Being a virgin, and not willing to sacrifice that to some math teacher, I told him that I’m sure we could reach a compromise. He had two choices: either I would tie him to his chair and give him an earth-shattering blowjob, but he would never, EVER lay a hand on me – or he could come to my place where I would use him to reach my own climax, but he would never, EVER cum in my presence.”

“So it’s true then, some women are just born wicked?” A firm squeeze of my shaft told me to shut up now.

“His answer didn’t surprise me as much as the way he said it. Without hesitation, he was on his knees, actually begging me to please use and abuse him. Now, between me and you, I was no virgin at 19. Far from it actually. And I really had no intention of sending this guy home with a loaded gun if he had the balls to come to my place. He was good-looking enough. But witnessing this pathetic display flipped some kind of switch in me. I slapped the old man’s face. Hard! (Another squeeze almost sends me over the edge). Then I turned around, and with my micro-skirt dancing at eye-level, leaned over his desk to write him a note with my address and a time on it. I kissed the note to leave my mark on it, then spit on it and slapped it to his forehead. Two more playful slaps to his already red cheek, a ‘don’t be late BITCH’ remark, and I was out the door. Mmmmmm, my pussy gets so wet just thinking about it!”

“So did he show up?”

“Yeah, five minutes late though. I think he was trying to test me. Can you believe this guy? Maybe we should go inside now. I don’t think the neighbors want to hear what happens next.”

[gobblegobble]

So my cock led me to the bedroom, with Kelly following right behind. Once we were in there, I could not keep my paws off of this beautiful woman for another minute. I began to kiss her passionately, running my fingers through her soft hair, and then further down her delicate frame. Embracing her breasts, I could feel the excitement in her nipples so I began to unbutton her blouse. All that stood between me and those perfect tits was a sheer, almost invisible pink bra. It was so sexy that I decided to leave it on for now, as I was eager to see if she had the matching set beneath her skirt. I slipped to my knees, and quickly slid her skirt down to her ankles. Unfortunately, Kelly was not wearing the pink panties. Fortunately, she was not wearing any panties at all. All that she was wearing down south was the faintest trace of peach fuzz. I wanted to dive in right then and there!

As I looked up at Kelly’s angelic face, the image of the professor on his knees suddenly invaded my mind. The upturn in the corner of her lips told me the connection was not lost on her. She teasingly scratched the bottom of my chin, then led me to my feet by it. Standing cheek-to-cheek, Kelly took a hold of my belt, and smoothly unwrapped my waistline. She broke the chilling silence with a single word, “Strip” and popped my belt for emphasis. Eager to please, I did just that. In seconds flat, we stood within inches of each other, Kelly’s pink bra the only clothing between us. This time it was she who initiated the kiss, nibbling gently on my lips, and then doing the same to my tongue (which was surprisingly erotic!). As I cupped her fantastic ass, Kelly cupped my loaded balls. She broke off the kiss, looked me in the eye, and backed me up against the nearby wall. Releasing her light grip on my balls, the vixen started to lightly scratch the inside of my thighs with her fingernails. Her nibbling on my lobe had the desired reaction, as I closed my eyes and let out a soft groan. “So, do you want to know what happened next?”

A sharp slap to my rigid cock brought me quickly back to reality. “Well, do you?” My mind was racing. I had just met this girl, and had never been so aroused in my life. But I also had no idea how far this ‘story’ was going to go. My sex life has always been rather vanilla. Satisfying, but ultimately familiar. How far was this woman planning on taking me? This time the slap connected with my bloated balls, reflecting her growing impatience with me. “I asked you a question.”

“Yes. Yes I do want to know. You are the most amazing creature I have ever met. I want to know everything about you. I want to know what turns you on, and what happens when you turn the heat up. I want to know every inch of your beautiful body. I want to know how to make you cum. Over and over and over again.”

“Good answer. Now get your ass on that bed.

[gobblegobble]

As I turned to head to the love-mattress, my thoughts were rudely interrupted by a stinging slap to my ass and Kelly’s infectious laugh. Message received. I picked up the pace and quickly found a comfortable spot on the bed. Kelly was in no such hurry. Looking up I saw her still standing across the room, one hand idly twirling her hair and the other massaging her obviously moist clit. With each passing minute the stunning goddess seemed to grow more and more beautiful. Without saying a word she sashayed her way to the pile of clothes in the middle of the floor. Slowly, deliberately, Kelly bent over to pick up my forsaken belt. She continued to the bed and straddled my chest, just below the neck. “You’re lucky you know. I wasn’t nearly this gentle with the professor.” Her words were carefully crafted to strike a balance of fear and excitement in my loins. “Give me your hands.” Doing so, I immediately lost the benefits of them as she fastened them to the headboard with my belt. Kelly leaned back effortlessly to enjoy her handiwork, and to allow my vulnerability to sink in.

Pleased with the situation, Kelly moved to slide her legs in between my outstretched arms. “Do you like to eat pussy Ronin?” My enthusiastic Yes Ma’am never materialized before Kelly’s sopping mound effectively silenced me. Oh, it was incredible! I was apparently enjoying myself a bit too much, though. A fierce twist of the nipple grabbed my attention as Kelly instructed “Slow down cowboy. We’re going to be doing this all (grind) night (grind) lonnnnggg.” Painful as it was, I admired my lover’s direction. She helped me appreciate this great gift that she was granting to me. I removed my tongue (which must have been buried six inches deep), and showered her gorgeous pussy with loving kisses. Kelly signaled her approval by massaging the aggrieved nipple.

Continuing to worship her womanhood, a random thought suddenly crossed my mind. “How long has it been since I took a breath?” I reached to tap Kelly and get her attention. The true effects of my binds suddenly overwhelmed me. I had been handcuffed before, but never with a real purpose. Was Kelly oblivious to my struggles? Was she indifferent to them? Strangely, these scenarios turned me on to no end! Still, a guy has to breathe, so I tried to gain her attention the only way I knew how. I would make a fuss in her puss. All of the senseless motion clearly displeased my goddess, and she must have found another 20 pounds to pressure my face with. After this did not stop my futile squirming Kelly resorted to an old trick, this time viciously pulling and twisting on both of my tender nipples. Again her not-so-subtle message was received. My lips again treated her to the soft adoration of true pussy worship, and she rewarded me with my first well-earned breath in quite some time.

“Let’s get a few things straight here, mister. One. You are trapped now, and at my complete and total mercy. Two. That’s how it’s going to be all night long. Three. I really like you, so try not to fuck things up, alright?” With that, breathing time came to an abrupt end. Kelly resumed her smothering dominance, and my lips renewed their newfound duty. We played this game for what seemed like hours until Kelly decided to turn it up a notch. “I want to cum now, so you may use your tongue again. Gently though, you will know when I want you to increase the intensity” she chuckled. “Now take a deep breath, they’ll be few and far between until your face is covered with my cum!”

[gobblegobble]

Now Understanding each other perfectly, Kelly lifted her treasure from my soaked face, and gracefully turned to face my engorged package. “Aww, this poor guy hasn’t been getting any attention, has he?” she quipped in the most seductive voice man has ever heard. “We’ll just have to do something about that now won’t we?” The way that my head was propped up on the pillows created the perfect angle for me to admire Kelly’s glorious ass as she brought her pussy to rest on my bare chest. Her wetness was undeniable. Surely I could bring her to orgasm in no time, right? Or so I thought until Kelly began relentlessly teasing my cock with mind-numbing efficiency. Her long arms allowed her to barely scratch from the back of my knees all the way to the very tip of my member. This was invariably followed by kisses so light that they matched the sensation of the world’s lightest feather duster. While all of this stirred me to a frenzy, it had quite the opposite effect on Kelly. Her gyrations on my chest slowed to a halt, and it was obvious that the control she exerted over me was quite soothing to her.

On top of it all, the great view of Kelly's globes only served to make me more and more anxious to once again worship her pussy. She had me in the proverbial pickle. The attention that she was lavishing on my cock was the best I’d ever had. But at the same time it was clear that I would not feel sweet relief any time soon. My mind wanted her to stop for so many reasons, but my body did not want her to ever stop. Just when I couldn’t stand it any longer, I felt Kelly take a deep breath. “I hope you enjoyed that. Not many men get that kind of special treatment.” Then a swift slap across the cock and her girly giggle. I really should learn to expect those by now. “So have you had a chance to catch your breath yet Ronin?” Realizing that she had left me totally speechless, Kelly shimmied backwards until the cleft of each cheek met with my exposed armpits. It kind of tickled.

“Say bye-bye baby” Kelly whispered, looking over her shoulder at me as she leaned forward granting me her still-moist honey hole. She was very agreeable at first, allowing me to repay her favors with gentle kisses until her juices started flowing again. But once this happened all bets were off! Kelly suddenly grew more aggressive than she had been in the short time that I had known her. My tongue found her switch deep inside, and we both felt it flip to ON. “Eat my pussy you little bitch!!! Eat it! Suck on it like your life depends on it! It just might.” Kelly’s pussy was depriving me of all oxygen, so this threat did not seem so idle at the time. “You’ve got a long way to go if you want to cum tonight baby! Eat my pussy like a MAN! I only let real men cum in this pussy.” Oh, how I wanted to grab this broad, toss her on the bed, and have my way with her (finally). But in my position, I couldn’t even grab her ass to take hold, let alone have my way with her. So I did the only thing I could do. Dive in deeper, find that sweet spot, and not stop until she is begging me for mercy.

“OHHHHMYYYY! That’s it. Don’t stop. Deeper. Deeper. OH DEEPER.” I’m really not sure who was more turned-on at this point. Her feather duster treatment would surely send me over the edge in a heartbeat now, and she was clearly on the verge of climax. I toyed with her for a brief moment, tonguing all around her sweet spot before finally pressing that magical button one last time. Neither of us was expecting the screaming torrent of cum that flowed from her pussy! I was completely conquered by her explosion, and she took hold of my thighs as if she was hanging on for dear life. My face, my hair, the pillows, hell, even my chest and shoulders were swimming in her juices. It was the most amazing experience of my short life! After allowing me ample time to recover, both of us still too appeased to speak, Kelly again slid her pussy onto my face. It was clear that she did not expect anything from me, she just wanted to feel that old familiar feeling one more time.

We were truly enjoying each other’s company when Kelly decided to ride my body like a Slip-N-Slide all the way down to my lonely cock. Lying chest to chest now, I felt the warm sensation of her satisfied pussy sliding on to the head of my cock. The look in her eyes was priceless, as she plopped my cock out of her, and applied the Slip-N-Slide treatment to the top of my cock. One look at my pleading eyes and she couldn’t resist kissing me. She clearly enjoyed the sweet taste of her strawberry nectar as much as I did. This time Kelly took my whole cock into her love box and rode us both to an incredible climax. She finally released me, and I did have my way with her. Over and over and over again.

I went to bed after the sun had risen, and woke up alone. There was a note on the nightstand though. “Meet me at the bar. 8:00. Don’t be late BITCH.”

[mulderboy]

Excellent story gobblegobble! Sorry I couldn't get around to reading it earlier. The story was alright at the beginning, but your writing got better as the story went along. The story itself all of a sudden took a turn for the better also.

Also loved the fact that there were virtually no grammatical errors. They can be very annoying in a story. Great job!

I look forward to reading more of your stories. :)

[Logan]

Nicely done, I love it most when the woman in the story isn't punishing the man but instead pleasuring herself. Great job