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sophiatoxic
07-10-2008, 3:35 AM
Could anyone recommend good freely-distributable femdom stories that have a special focus on mindgames and humiliation? I'm trying to round out my own site's library.

What are the fan-favorites?
If I asked each person for a top ten list, what titles are likely to be mentioned?

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To answer this question for myself, my favorite two authors I've encountered have been cowgirl and slave shoelicker.
http://www.toxictreat.com/posts/Cowgirl_Stories
http://www.toxictreat.com/posts/Shoelicker_Stories

Their work features strong psychological focus, extreme humiliation, and life destruction.

Who else should be on this list?

Sophia

smell_her_thong
07-10-2008, 6:48 AM
www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories (run a search)
www.asstr.org/~mcstories
www.asstr.org/~Kristen/mc/index.htm

sophiatoxic
07-10-2008, 7:23 AM
Thanks for the links. I'll make sure they're added and that people look through those. But hopefully, someone out there has already gone through and found the best of the best of those sorts of stories.

"mindcontrol" stories are close, but I must confess, I find the supernatural or science-fiction aspects annoying. The thing I find particularly pleasant about both Cowgirl and Shoelicker is that their stories, although fictional, are still entirely plausible. No magic, no hypnosis, no alien mind control device-- just simple mind games and intense desire.

So, if anyone knows anything along those lines, do speak up.

Sophia

damselsthrall
07-11-2008, 3:44 AM
My Top Ten stories list, not including Shoelicker nor me :D(The Perishable Heart http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/wholestory.php?storyid=3364)

Number 1:
Mall Princess and its sequel Mall Princess Moves In
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/wholestory.php?storyid=4932
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/wholestory.php?storyid=5161

Numbers 2 through 9, in no particular order:

An Alternative Life
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/wholestory.php?storyid=2564

Natalie
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/wholestory.php?storyid=4890

Courtney
http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/misc3/courtney.txt
originally posted on alt.sex.stories 12/17/04

The Footman of LA, Part 1 (http://www.geocities.com/pedic.geo/footman1.htm)
The Footman of LA, Part 2 (http://www.geocities.com/pedic.geo/footman2.htm)
Part 3 - missing
The Footman of LA, Part 4 (http://groups.google.com/group/alt.sex.femdom/browse_thread/thread/a74fd3adc297c59d/20e1593db54df762?hl=en&lnk=st&q=mrspraycan#20e1593db54df762)
The Footman of LA, Part 5 (http://groups.google.com/group/alt.sex.femdom/browse_thread/thread/a70ba412b7aed072/d3481429116d9af9?hl=en&lnk=st&q=#d3481429116d9af9)
The Footman of LA, Part 6 (http://groups.google.com/group/alt.sex.stories/browse_thread/thread/6722045f79131219/ddfe13a32a3c6cb1?hl=en&lnk=st&q=#ddfe13a32a3c6cb1)
Part 7 - missing

Ten Days in Another Town
http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/Nessus/FemDom/Ten%20Days%20in%20Another%20Town.txt

Larry's Lost Manhood
http://www.asstr.org/files/Collections/Old_Joe's_Collection/Femdom/Larry's%20Lost%20Manhood.txt

Shame on You, Mr. Hyde
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/wholestory.php?storyid=1824

Little Miss Sissy Whore
http://www.asstr.org/nifty/transgender/authoritarian/little-miss-sissy-whore

Slave to a Man-Hater
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/wholestory.php?storyid=2429

FromAustralia
07-11-2008, 5:43 AM
some interesting reads there, thank you.

damselsthrall
07-11-2008, 6:17 PM
A few more favorites.

Ms. Anna Moreau
http://www.tpe.com/~altarboy/nt041224.htm
http://www.tpe.com/~altarboy/nt050332.htm

A Slave's Road
http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/wholestory.php?storyid=34

Joining the Squad
http://www.mybdsm.com/pages/teaseme/cheer1.html
http://www.mybdsm.com/pages/teaseme/cheer2.html
http://www.mybdsm.com/pages/teaseme/cheer3.html
http://www.mybdsm.com/pages/teaseme/cheer4.html
http://www.mybdsm.com/pages/teaseme/cheer5.html
http://www.mybdsm.com/pages/teaseme/cheer6.html

Finally, no list would be complete without Venus in Furs
http://www.fullbooks.com/Venus-in-Furs.html

hambonebean2003
07-12-2008, 3:27 PM
any good toilet-slave stories?

damselsthrall
07-12-2008, 6:44 PM
any good toilet-slave stories?Several of those I previously mentioned incorporate toilet slavery. Most of Jim Hale's stories (http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/author.php?authorid=972) generally feature that subject (check out "Cassie's Secret" in particular), as do those of Koppite727 (http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/author.php?authorid=1516) and Underdog (http://www.bdsmlibrary.com/stories/author.php?authorid=1918). In some ways, the latter's "Freshman Year Girlfriend" is the definitive toilet slave story. Then there's Slave Shoelicker's stories, of course.

In other news, here's an excellent humiliation story in audio form.
http://www.princessgracesplayground.com/birthday_party_part_1.mp3
http://www.princessgracesplayground.com/birthday_party_part_2.mp3
http://www.princessgracesplayground.com/birthday_party_part_3.mp3

femsub3
07-13-2008, 11:57 AM
I'm a huge fan of the SlaveShoelicker's stories, so I might have things of interest! :)

Sophia, this page: http://www.geocities.com/dirtyfeetguy/
.... has a lot of that. I particularly like the ones under the 'Slavery' section.

And http://www.youlysses.com/stories.html has tons of good stuff too.

Good luck!

damselsthrall
07-13-2008, 8:23 PM
i do commend you damselsthrall on your outstanding taste in erotic fiction.Thank you. Many of the above stories were influenced by "Teen Femdom," aka the bible of female domination stories.:worship:

Shoelicker, did you know that "Humiliated in Albuquerque" was once excerpted in a book called San Francisco Bizarro? Click here to read it. (http://books.google.com/books?id=VPWQ04Vbf10C&pg=PT107&dq=humiliated+in+albuquerque&sig=ACfU3U1gU7DR4SNrg5RF1QHawU2QS8XR-A)

damselsthrall
07-14-2008, 12:55 AM
Sometimes the best-written, most technically proficient stories aren't the most memorable nor push the right buttons. Something like Cruel Chastity/The Bitchy Tease/The Tender Bitch (http://web.archive.org/web/20041223112301/www.cruelchastity.com/main.html) may never win a Pulitzer, but if you can relate to it, you probably won't be able to stop reading it.

Jadis
07-14-2008, 8:50 AM
I want to note - though you probably already know: our own story section has some wonderful tales to read ... so do enjoy!

draculay
07-14-2008, 8:58 AM
I want to note - though you probably already know: our own story section has some wonderful tales to read ... so do enjoy!

Then Lady Jadis you veell move this to the appropriate forum ~_^

Jadis
07-14-2008, 9:00 AM
Then Lady Jadis you veell move this to the appropriate forum ~_^

hehe good point ... now where is that sticking out my tongue icon when I need it? -lol-

draculay
07-14-2008, 9:02 AM
hehe good point ... now where is that sticking out my tongue icon when I need it? -lol-

am sure that tongue is being put to good use by the Domme-er icons on this forum ^^

this one is available for now ^^

http://gracewalk.files.wordpress.com/2007/08/bull-sticking-out-tongue-wallpaper.jpg

Jadis
07-14-2008, 9:04 AM
am sure that tongue is being put to good use by the Domme-er icons on this forum ^^

:pbbbbblt:

Now I feel better -lol-

draculay
07-14-2008, 9:06 AM
I love an obedient domme ~_^

Jadis
07-14-2008, 9:09 AM
I love an obedient domme ~_^

Oh you're just TRYING to yank my chain now -lol- You're lucky you're out of reach ... ! Now we've got to quit bogarting the thread ~_^

kingkong
07-14-2008, 2:01 PM
Self-censored post.

Disciple1
07-15-2008, 7:50 AM
Sometimes the best-written, most technically proficient stories aren't the most memorable nor push the right buttons. Something like Cruel Chastity/The Bitchy Tease/The Tender Bitch (http://web.archive.org/web/20041223112301/www.cruelchastity.com/main.html) may never win a Pulitzer, but if you can relate to it, you probably won't be able to stop reading it.

A masterpiece! shame not all parts are accessible now

damselsthrall
07-16-2008, 1:29 AM
A masterpiece! shame not all parts are accessible nowYou can find the whole thing right here (http://mistressdestiny.com/forums/showthread.php?t=79226) on this board.

Disciple1
07-16-2008, 3:15 AM
You can find the whole thing right here (http://mistressdestiny.com/forums/showthread.php?t=79226) on this board.

Thanks man, great story!

007her2
07-16-2008, 5:28 PM
This is my favorite story from http://www.geocities.com/dirtyfeetguy/

And it is exactly the type of domination SophiaToxic is looking for. :o)

Pool-boy

By Author Unknown

I am lucky enough to have a stern, confident Mistress like Selena. She is five years younger than I am, and grew up right next door to me. But, Selena is hardly "the girl next door!" When she was only 15, I could tell she was going to be a superfox as she already had a mature, 5'6", 112 lb., 36-23-34 figure with long, blonde hair an a ravishing face. I could also tell she was a budding, young dominant.

It was also about this time that I discovered fem-dom. I was always submissive to women and they controlled me, but at age 21 I was discovering a new lifestyle! That summer, as Selena lay out by her backyard pool in her dental-floss bikinis, I watched and watched and watched, becoming ever so attracted to her. With our parents (both of our parents) at work all day, I decided to approach her with my desires. Selena was never too friendly to me, but just enough to keep neighbor-relations at a comfortable level. She knew she was the most gorgeous creature in the entire town, and acted that way. When I came up to her, she was sitting poolside on a lawn chair in a skimpy white micro-mini bikini, dark shades and an empty glass at her side.

"Hello, Selena," I said, studying ever inch and curve of her flawless body. She lifted her shades to notice my trembling body and asked what I wanted. "I - I - I - just wanted to tell you th-that I think you're beautiful, Selena," I blubbered. She never really let off an emotion (except anger). "Yeah, I know! Anything else?" she asked. I told Selena I had nothing to do, that I thought she was a goddess, and would like to know if she'd like to do something.... The look on her face I'll never forget. It was one of pure dominance. "No idiot!" she ripped, "I want to tan, but since you think so highly of me, I'll let you stay...but ...you're gonna have to make yourself useful," Selena said. I was so happy to be in her presence. "Anything, Selena...anything at all!" I whispered.

Selena told me to fetch her another glass of iced tea, and I obeyed. I don't think she was surprised by my compliance, but she was interested in my response. "As you wish, Selena," I replied. "What? Am I the queen of the pool now?" she sarcastically asked in her young voice. "If I - I had a vote, Selena, I - I'd make you the queen of the world...." I blubbered. "HaHa," she laughed, "Then you can be my pool-boy!" she said.

That first day, I played the pool-boy role, and served her drinks by the pool, made her sandwiches and a salad, fanned her with an Oriental-styled fan, and did what she said. This "little game" became a little more serious after two weeks of serving her. I arrived at 10:30 a.m., and she was already laying out. "Good morning, Selena," I said, handing her that month's issues of Vogue and Cosmo, which she had told me to do last night. "Thank you, pool-boy...now I want you to go to the mall and get me a new bottle of nail polish and some nail polish remover," she directed, handing me an empty bottle of coral shade polish. I paused a moment just to soak in the memory of her attitude change. "Well? What are you waiting for? Christmas?" Selena ripped. "I-I'm sorry, Selena...I-I'll go now," I replied, and drove off to the mall to run the errand.

When I returned, I was felling so submissive that I knelt down on one knee on the concrete at her feet as she sat in the lawn chair. I handed her the package, and she acknowledged my return. "That was quick, good boy!" she said in a condescending voice. Selena lifted one of her bare feet up to my face, and pushed her bare toes into my chin. "Have you ever painted a girl's toenails?" she asked me. "N-No, Selena," I answered. She smiled, and then showed me how to paint a toenail by doing one of her own. It was now my turn, and I slowly and cautiously painted the toe-nails of a teen superfox as she sat back cockily eating an apple (that I had to polish) and reading her mags. It was "the" most humbling experience of my life at the time. Her size 6 1/2 bare feet were beautiful and soft and smooth, young and shapely with a high arch and perfect toes. When I finished, Selena looked at 'em. "Not good enough!" she disapproved, "Remove the polish with the remover and start again!" I swallowed my Adam's apple. "Yes, Selena," I answered. I did this three more times over the next 2 hours, then finally blew them dry when Selena approved of my work.

I performed such menial tasks at Selena's feet the entire summer! I fanned her, served her drinks and food, ran errands for her and painted her toenails and finger-nails. I even clipped 'em as best as I could from time to time. That fall, I went away to school, and wrote Selena about once or twice a month. I told Selena I was taking a class at a cosmetology center and reading up on how to do a proper pedicure and manicure. "Good boy!" she wrote back, "Maybe you're not useless after all."

The following summer, when Selena was 17, we continued out little Pool Queen/Pool-Boy game. I loved taking orders from such a young fox. By then, I had graduated and purposely stayed at home another year because of Selena. The whole school year, Selena made me run for beer for her and her friends (for a party), chauffeur her around and run errands. I was falling for her, but knew I had to wait until she got out of H.S. to ask her on a date. After 2 years of service, Selena was about to confirm my status. It happened the next summer.

Last summer, Selena graduated H.S. She's 18 now! Then, as I had become an expert pedicurist, manicurist and pool-boy (3 years exp.), Selena told me this: "You know why I like you, Richard? Because you're such a wimp! You do what ever I say, and do it well. I like that. Also...your dad's fucking rich!" she laughed, and then lifted her left bare foot to my lips and pressed. "Why don't you lick the sweat off my feet? Show me how much you adore me! Go ahead," she continued, "Worship my foot."

I slowly grasped her delicate ankles and tongue-lapped her beautiful foot. Following, Selena directed me to the house, and closed the curtains behind. "Kneel before me, Richard!" she said. I obeyed. "Guys are always doing what I tell 'em to but they just want a piece of ass - Not you! You really adore me, don't you?" she asked. "Yes, Selena...I-I'd do anything for you!" I replied. "You have!" she said, "Now I want you to show me how much by worshipping my body with that tongue of yours!" That was an order. I lapped her cunt 'til she climaxed, and went on to lick every part of her young, 18 year old, firm body very subserviently. When I got to her perfectly toned ass, she forced my face in between her cheeks by sitting on it. Selena "mashed" my face with her ass - as I licked he ruptured hole.

When it was all over, I told her I was her slave and she could do what she wanted with me, but asked her to keep me. "Yes! Yes I will" she said. I've been her servant ever since. I love Mistress Selena. I would happily be her toilet slave as well as her spittoon, but she isn't really into it - yet! For now, I do what Selena says, and service her orally from head to toe. Female Domination is truly beautiful.