A story my wife and I wrote together. BBW Domme

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  1. 0kie

    0kie New Member

    My wife and I took turns writing this story. Please be patient we are not professional writers and I'm sure there are a lot of mistakes. Any feedback is appreciated.






    Zack’s first encounter with Betsy blew his mind. It was like all his fantasies came true in one night. He tried for days to piece together all the events, but his mind was mush. All he knew was he desperately wanted more. Zack was in love with how Betsy could be punishing and compassionate at he same time. Betsy has an uncanny ability to take Zack to another world. Her passion is intoxicating to him, and he craves it all day every day.

    Zack only had a short time to share with Betsy before he had to go back out to work. The separation was killing him. Video chatting was fun, but he wanted to FEEL her. Zack wants to worship her body and make her happy. Zack wants to spoil Betsy. He wants to make her feel as special as he sees her in his eyes. He plans on taking her out to a nice dinner when he is back in town. Date number two will be special. Just as soon as he made it back to town he made plans to take out his fantasy girl.

    Zack pulled into Betsy’s driveway a little early and made his way to her front door. He rang her doorbell and didn’t have to wait long for Betsy to answer. She opened the door and greeted him wearing a classy blouse that showed a little cleavage and a silky skirt that came down to her calves. Zack stepped through the door and their lips met with a passionate kiss. Zack’s hands roamed all over Betsy’s body, softly squeezing and rubbing all over her. Betsy broke off the kiss and said, “I have to finish putting on my makeup. Why don’t you come back and hang out with me for a minute?”. Betsy didn’t wait for Zack to answer. She turned and walked back to her bathroom and Zack followed her watching her ass sway beneath her skirt.

    When they reached Betsy’s master bath Zack had a seat on the ledge of her garden tub while Betsy leaned over her counter and finished applying her makeup. Her ass was on full display right in front of Zack’s face and he could hardly stand it. Zack slid off his seat on the tub and sat on his knees behind Betsy. He reached out with both hands and felt Betsy’s calves. Zack slowly ran his hands up the back of her thighs and rubbed them. He raised her skirt, and to his delight, he exposed her bare ass. Zack leaned in and let Betsy’s skirt fall behind his head. Zack squeezed and rubbed Betsy’s ass and then he buried his face in her crack. He began licking the outside of her hole while he rubbed her cheeks with his hands. Zack maneuvered his hands between Betsy’s legs and started playing with her pussy while he tongue fucked her pretty hole. Betsy pushed Zack’s head away from her with her ass and turned to face him. “Momma has a surprise for her bitch before dinner. Take off your pants and go lay on my bed.”, she said. Zack rose to his feet and did as Betsy said. He wasn’t sure what to expect but he was excited to find out what Betsy had planned.

    Zack laid on his back on top of the covers, naked from the waist down. Betsy sauntered into her room and Zack saw that she was carrying his surprise. In her hands was a huge black rubber butt plug and a bottle of lube. Betsy leaned over and gave Zack a little kiss on the lips, and then she whispered into his ear, “Momma’s gonna fuck your ass good when we get back, and you’re gonna take it like a good bitch.” Betsy wasn’t asking. She was telling her bitch how it was going to be. Zack nodded his head as Betsy lubed up the plug. Betsy inserted the plug like it was business as usual. Zack could feel the plug sliding into him filling him up, and it hurt so good. “If you keep it in like a good bitch momma will fuck your ass good with her big cock when we get back.”, she purred. “Get up. Get dressed. Let’s go eat.”, Betsy chirped. Zack got out of bed and tried not to show any signs of discomfort while he got dressed but the plug in his ass was hard to ignore.

    Zack and Betsy arrived at the restaurant and were seated at a quiet table. Zack sat down, and Betsy sat caddie corner next to him. She placed her hand on Zack’s upper thigh and told the waitress to bring back a whiskey and a glass of plum wine while they looked over the menu. When the waitress left to get their drinks, Betsy gave Zack’s cock a good squeeze under the table cloth. “I hope you’re ready for tonight because I am!”, she said. Zack was confident he was ready. He wanted it bad. “Oh, I’m ready. I’ve been dreaming about seeing you again.”, he said. Betsy and Zack enjoyed a delicious dinner and flirted back and forth all night. Zack drove back to Betsy’s house with his arm around her neck and her hand playfully rubbing his cock outside his jeans.

    Zack pulled into Betsy’s driveway and killed his engine. He pulled Betsy’s face to his and they kissed. Zack’s hands roamed all over Betsy’s boobs and belly. Betsy unzipped Zack’s pants and squeezed Zack’s already hard cock. “No cumming until I say so.”, she growled. “Ok, momma”, said Zack. Betsy pulled he boob out of her blouse and said, “Suck on momma’s titty.” Zack laid his head in Betsy’s lap and suckled her nipple why Betsy paid a little attention to his cock and balls. Betsy would stroke Zack’s cock and bring him to the edge and then torture his privates by squeezing and slapping it to bring him back down. All the while Zack sucked Betsy’s nipples between grunts and moans. Betsy was enjoying herself but was ready to get the evening started. She pulled his lips off her nipples and said, “Let’s go inside. This night is just getting started.” They exited the truck and made their way into Betsy’s house. Once inside they embraced and kissed passionately. Zack kissed Betsy back with a purpose. He wanted to be the best kisser in the world for her. Suddenly Betsy sent her knee crashing into Zack’s privates. The blow shocked Zack and nearly brought him to his knees. Betsy helped Zack stand back up straight and then sent another knee into him. Zack let out a groan and Betsy said, “Mmmm, that’s a good bitch. Take it for momma. You’ll never forget this night.”

    Betsy loved hearing Zack moan as her knee connected with his cock and balls. She leaned in and kissed him hard and started fucking his mouth with her tongue, reaching between his legs and feeling how much he had enjoyed the attentions she had just given him by how stiff his cock was. While they were at the restaurant Betsy had given Zack a Viagra, he didn’t need it to get hard, but she wanted his cock at attention all night long. Zack flinched as she rubbed his cock, fearful of the pain she might inflict. Betsy just rubbed it gently telling what a good job he was doing until he relaxed. She pulled back and looked him in the eye, grinned and said, “now it’s time to get serious, we’re about to ramp it up”. Zack’s eyes sparkled with anticipation. “I’m going to go get more comfortable and get us a few toys to play with, why don’t you pour us some drinks and take your clothes off, I’ll be right back.” With that She pulled her top off over her head and started pulling her skirt down as she walked down the hall, tossing them in the laundry room as she passed and then disappeared into her room.

    Zack poured himself a stiff drink, downed it and then poured another one and made Betsy one as well. He could feel his excitement starting to bubble over and he was doing his best to keep his wits about him. He quickly undressed, still no quite used to the pressure from the plug in his ass that Betsy had placed before they left for dinner but starting to become more comfortable. Betsy had praised him throughout dinner for being able to behave so naturally, she told him she wanted him to know she was inside him and for it to remind of her love and attention for him every time he felt it shift inside. It had worked, each time it’s presence started to fade as he was becoming more used to it he would shift and feel it’s fullness inside him and his cock would swell knowing it was because she cared enough to take the time to put it there for him.

    Betsy returned wearing a black tank top, her breast spilling out of the top, the fabric clinging to her soft belly rolls, her ass jiggling just below the bottom of the fabric. Zack’s eyes started at her feet and took their time working their way up her body until he found hers. She has brought a slim dildo, some lube and what looked like a riding crop back with her. Her eyes sparkled, and she has a devilish grin as she walked over to where he was sitting on the couch, she sat her toys on the end table and took one leg and placed it between his legs, forcing him to spread his legs and she moved in close and grabbed the back of his head and pulling into her soft belly. When she finally released him, she pulled her tits out of the top of the tank top that was struggling to contain them and ordered him to suck like a good bitch. Zack placed his mouth around her right nipple and sucked hungrily as he used his other hand to massage her left breast. Betsy pushed him back into the couch, causing his mouth to separate from her hard nipple. She pressed her knee, that was already between his thighs, hard into his swollen cock as she climbed on top of him resting her wet pussy on top of his right thigh, it was painful, but it was a soft pleasant pain that she was inflicting on his package and he loved it. She started grinding on his thigh as she leaned in as started kissing him hard again. Zack didn’t know what to do with his hands, they roamed vigorously all over her body, and how he wished he could touch all of her all at once. He loved feeling her heavy weight pressing him into the couch and the pressure of her knee on top on his cock.

    Betsy stood and helped Zack to his feet. She took his spot on the couch and made him stand in front of her. She quickly grabbed the riding crop and used it to slap the inside forcing his legs farther apart with each stinging blow. Once she was satisfied with his stance she brought the riding crop up between his legs inflicting stinging blows to his balls. His cock was as hard as steel, and she slapped the tip with her instrument of pain. Zack stood there taking each blow as stoically as possible, determined to take whatever his momma wanted him too. Betsy’s cunt was flooded with her juices over her excitement, Zack’s ability and eagerness to take her abuse made her run hot. She smiled up at Zack, telling him what a good job he was doing and how impressed she was with how well he was taking her attention she was giving him. “Time to turn around and bend over the ottoman” she said. Zack did as told and bent over the ottoman resting on his forearms, Betsy delivered a hard-vicious blow to his nut sack with her crop and slowly ran it up his crack, brushing the tip over the base of the plug that was still deep in his ass, she then gave it several quick flicks causing him to whimper each time it connected with one of his cheeks. She then sat her crop back on the end table and grabbed the dildo, generously lubing it up. She gave his boys a hard squeeze and then ran her had up to the plug and pulled it out quickly without warning, causing Zack to gasp. “Don’t worry my Honey B, Momma’s going to take good care of your hole”. She then replaced it with a finger swirling it inside, stretching his hole with each movement. She pulled her finger out and then immediately replaced it with the long slim dildo, pushing it in all the way to the base causing Zack to fall onto his belly onto the ottoman, overwhelmed with the intense sensation and fullness. Betsy began massaging his cheeks with both her hands, causing the silicone cock to rock in and out of his ass slightly, Betsy stood and pressed her thigh into his ass, her knee aligning perfectly with his ball sack, delivering painfully pleasurable blows with each thrust.

    Zack laid on his belly, bent over the ottoman, and struggled to comprehend exactly what was happening to him. His body was in pain, but his mind was in ecstasy. Zack could feel each of Betsy’s blows driving the dildo further in his ass and smashing his cock and balls. After what seemed like hours Betsy stopped and laid her body down on top of Zack’s. Betsy kissed the back of his neck and caressed the hair on his head. Betsy whispered in Zack’s ear, “Momma’s pussy is soaking wet and it needs your attention.”. Betsy got off Zack and told him to lay on his back. She straddled him facing his feet and lowered her sweet pussy down on his mouth. Betsy wiggled her hips to make sure his face was buried deep inside her. Zack instinctively started to lick her pussy and clit while Betsy rocked her hips back and forth slowly. Soon Zack began to struggle for air but didn’t want to stop pleasing his goddess. When he thought he was close to his limit he tapped Betsy on the thigh. Betsy noticed the tap, but Zack’s tongue felt so good on her pussy she didn’t want to get up yet. Zack continued licking but was starting to get desperate for air. He tapped her again and she still didn’t move. Zack turned his head to the side quickly and was able to gasp a breath of air. Betsy slapped Zack’s cock and said, “Keep that head straight and lick momma’s cunt bitch.”. Zack continued licking. Betsy continued grinding. All the while the dildo was still in Zack’s ass. Zack was searching for air again and turned his head to the side. Frustrated, Betsy got off Zack and told him to bend back over the ottoman. Zack did as he was told, and Betsy spanked him. She spanked his cheeks until they were nice and red and then pulled the dildo out of his ass. Betsy sat back on the couch and relaxed. She sipped on her drink for a minute while Zack gathered his thoughts.

    Zack collected himself and noticed his fantasy girl sitting nude on the couch with her legs spread. He made his way to the floor in front of her and buried his face in her sweet pussy. He used both hands to play with her asshole and pussy while he sucked and licked her clit. Betsy used both hands to pull Zack’s face into her sex hard and Zack licked for all he was worth. Betsy’s orgasm hit hard, and Zack could feel her insides convulsing. Zack was filled with pride because he knew he made Betsy feel good. He crawled up on the couch with her and suckled her nipple while they both relaxed.

    Zack suckled Betsy’s breast while she rubbed his head and back praising him for how well he took his ass fucking. She pulled a piece of ice out of his glass of whiskey and let it drip onto her breast, down to her nipple and into Zack’s mouth, she then grabbed the glass and poured a small stream, so Zack was getting some in his mouth with each suckle and the rest slid off the slope of her breast and onto his chest. She grabbed him by his hair and yanked him off her tit, she stood letting him fall onto the couch. Once he was laying down she took a seat on his face, her right ass cheek swallowing his entire face. She grabbed the riding crop from the table and used it to squat his cock and balls from her position perched on his face. She loved that he would flinch with his whole body each time the crop connected with a part of his manhood. She swung her leg over him to where she was straddling him facing his feet and moved her ass onto his chest where she bounced forcing the air from his lungs. She took her time, slowly bouncing her ass down his body, torturing his cock with each bounce. Once her ass and pussy were on top of his hard cock, she raised up and let it slide deep inside her. She sat still for a minute just letting him feel her flex the muscles inside her sex around his hard shaft. Zack moaned in ecstasy squeezing and rubbing Betsy’s ass. Betsy grabbed his hands and moved them up to her waist and she began riding his cock, slowly at first and then picking up the pace. “I want you to cum in Momma’s pussy and then lick me clean and make me cum! Now be a good bitch and cum for Momma!” All it took was her permission and one more pump and Zack shot his hot load deep inside her. Betsy could feel him convulsing underneath her, she just slowed her pace until she was sitting still again slowly contracting her sex muscles around his cock. With each contraction of her muscles Zack would gasp, it was too much for his sensitive cock to handle. Betsy stopped flexing her sex muscles but still did not dismount, she sat there until she felt Zack’s cock soften and slowly slide out of her. Betsy dismounted and got up and started walking to her bedroom, “Come on, it’s time for my bitch to clean up the mess he just made” When Zack was finally able to get up off the couch, he made his way back to the bedroom and found Betsy lying on the bed with her knees apart waiting on him. He immediately climbed into position, Betsy lifted her ass up and told him to get her hole too, she could feel his mess sliding down between her cheeks. Zack stuck his face deep in her pussy and licked in long strokes from her hole to her cunt, licking her clean. Once she was all clean he stuck his fingers deep in her ass and licked her clit with ferocity until she shuttered in orgasm. Once her orgasm subsided Zack laid his head on her thigh as they both lay there relaxed and completed sated.
     
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  2. M0mmaB

    M0mmaB New Member

    Love it!
     
  3. pervy2

    pervy2 Member

    Your story makes me so horny! I think you two certainly have the gift and I love your work.
     
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  4. Michael kaye

    Michael kaye New Member

    Really good story, thank you for sharing
     

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